Peer Review

Peer Revie: Sam – Shakespeare as a person

https://samuelgroom1.wordpress.com/2019/03/17/shakespeare-as-a-person/

Hi Sam,

You are definitely right about Shakespeare being a great person to have a drink with I think. I don’t know that I agree that he would be a good friend, a guy who wrote as much as he did in a lifetime can’t have had too much time for friends.  He would surely be a great storyteller though!

Just a small criticism, be aware of repeating words and phrases. Many of your points begin with”He would also” or “I also think” or something to that effect. It can be a bit jarring for the reader to come across repetition like that as it interrupts the flow.

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